Word by Word

Practical insights for writers from Jessica P Morrell

Annie Dillard: The Death of a Moth

Written By: Jessica Morrell - May• 05•14

I cannot mention often enough how noticing, or awareness is a writer’s obligation. A necessary ingredient to our days. A tool that deepens and changes the way we walk in the world.  Here’s an example that proves this from Annie Dillard. candle flame

“One night a moth flew into the candle, was caught, burnt dry, and held. I must have been staring at the candle, or maybe I looked up when a shadow crossed my page; at any rate, I saw it all. A golden female moth, a biggish one with a two-inch wingspan, flapped into the fire, dropped her abdomen into the wet wax, stuck, flamed, frazzled and fried in a second. Her moving wings ignited like tissue paper, enlarging the circle of light in the clearing and creating out of the darkness the sudden blue sleeves of my sweater, the green leaves of jewelweed by my side, the ragged red trunk of pine. At once the light contracted again and the moth’s wings vanished in a fine, foul smoke. At the same time her six legs clawed, curled, blackened, and ceased, disappearing utterly. And her head jerked in spasms, making a spattering noise; her antennae crisped and burned away and her heaving mouth parts crackled like pistol fire. When it was all over, her head was, so far as I could determine, gone, gone the long way of her wings and legs. Had she been new, or old? Had she mated and laid her egg, had she done her work? All that was left was the glowing horn shell of her abdomen and thorax – a fraying, partially collapsed gold tube jammed upright in the candle’s round pool.

And then this moth-essence, this spectacular skeleton, began to act as a wick. She kept burning. The wax rose in the moth’s body from her soaking abdomen to her thorax to the jagged hole where her head should be, and widened into flame, a saffron-yellow flame that robed her to the ground like any immolating monk. That candle had two wicks, two flames of identical height, side by side. The moth’s head was fire. She burned for two hours, until I blew her out.

She burned for two hours without changing, without bending or leaning – only glowing within, like a building fire glimpsed through silhouetted walls, like a hollow saint, like a flame-faced virgin gone to God, while I read by her light, kindled, while Rimbaud in Paris burns out his brains in a thousand poems, while night pooled wetly at my feet.” ~ Annie Dillard
The Death of a Moth

[The reader must be startled to watch this apparently calm, matter-of-fact account of the writer’s life and times turn before his eyes into a mess of symbols whose real subject matter is their own relationship. I hoped the reader wouldn’t feel he’d been had. I tried to ensure that the actual, historical moth wouldn’t vanish into idea, but would stay physically present.]

 

Quick Take: What do your characters notice?

Written By: Jessica Morrell - May• 01•14

I’m working on a two-part column about voice in fiction. I’m hoping to help writers master voice and get closer to their characters. Which got me thinking–what people notice tells us a lot about them. When my father visits the Northwest from the upper Midwest he notices that there are a lot of SUVs  and foreign cars here. Portland looks Bohemian to him and he cannot figure out how one city can support so many restaurants. My mother notices the houses and neighborhoods, I notice flowers, trees and sky. I sniff the air a lot.  I notice lies. Child's hand in mud

When I was pregnant with my daughter I noticed other pregnant women. Now I notice children the same age as our youngest granddaughter. My friend Jay notices hitchhikers and people on sidewalks. When we go to parties or gatherings I notice dynamics between people and how the place is decorated. I remember the food. He notices  book collections and remembers if someone is kind to him or rubs him wrong; if people seem to be doing okay or struggling financially.We both notice bird antics and bird calls.

My friends in recovery notice addictive tendencies.  My foodie friends and I notice new ingredients when we shop for groceries, trends in the industry. My neighbor Max, aged five,  notices cats and tiny, magical aspects of nature like moss, buds, stones, and twisted twigs. His sister Gigi notices small mysteries and sees stories in everything.

Learn what matters to people and translate it to storytelling.

Keep writing, keep dreaming, have heart

 

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Written By: Jessica Morrell - May• 01•14

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Bitter Truth: It’s best to play nice

Written By: Jessica Morrell - Apr• 25•14

play nice EinsteinPlay Nice….

Because if you don’t, the sad truth is that it will come back to bite you.

 I’m no Miss Manners, nor a saint, never will be, never aspire to be. I’m opinionated, I interrupt, I procrastinate, and I complain too much. This is just a small sample of my maladies.  So we can all agree that sainthood is not in my future….However, I believe in the power of good karma and believe in avoiding bad juju. Send good into the world, receive good back. Dump bad into the world, well, do so at your own peril. And it’s just easier to be good.

 If you read this blog you know that I’m self-employed. This means I’m always juggling a bunch of projects. I teach, coordinate three writing conferences, write, and work as a developmental editor. A few weeks ago I fell behind because I took time off over Spring Break. So the following week my to-do list was extra long, the email correspondence daunting, a clock was ticking, and my office was its usual cluttered mess. When you’re self-employed you always feel pressured and there are never enough hours to accomplish what needs to get done. Or at least that’s my experience.

 I was happy when I finished an editing project (I had three in the works) and sent it off to a client. Which is when things got strange. The client was not able to read the Track Changes comments on her manuscript. Now, most of us would assume that there was a compatibility issue or some such problem if the editing marks weren’t coming through correctly. This client decided that I had not completed the work and started barraging me with accusations and rude remarks, and threatening that she was never going to hire me again. That last one was a welcome threat. What likely happened is that she didn’t know how to open up the Track Changes function on her computer and we were using two different Word programs.

This went on for four or five days. I answered most of her increasingly bizarre emails and sent multiple versions of the manuscript in different formats, and managed to not be rude in return. And, true to form, complained to my man. When I sent her yet another version of her manuscript, it came with some unsolicited advice: The publishing world is a tough place, especially for authors who haven’t broken in yet. The next time you run into technical glitches handle them with professionalism because in this business you need to make friends, not enemies. We’re done.

 The first thing any editor or agent wants to know about you is whether you’re sane and easy to work with. The. First. Thing. So play nice and NEVER send wacky emails.

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Writing Advice from Joss Whedon

Written By: Jessica Morrell - Apr• 23•14

Joss WeedenJoss Whedon

I wasn’t sure how to start this, so I did anyway. I’ve faced plenty of writer’s block in my time, though maybe less than some. I’ll lay out whatever rules for dealing with it that come to me. I think I’ve already laid out the first.

Control your environment. No one comes or goes. You’re alone, with enough time not only to write but to fall into the place of writing, which can take a while. No internet, no phone. Play music. It can amp the mood and separate you from the people on the other side of the door. (I listen to movie scores when I write. Nothing with lyrics—too distracting. Modern movie scores are very drone-y, in a good way for writers. Just sustained emotion. Hans Zimmer, Rachel Portman, Carter Burwell, Mychael Danna…there’s tons.) Make sure your desk faces the right way. (I have to face the room, not the wall.) Not too much clutter…it all matters.

Start writing. You can overthink anything. You can wind yourself up into a frenzy of inertia by letting a blank page stay blank. Write something on it. (Don’t draw something on it. The moment I doodle on a page I know nothing else will ever go on it. The blank page is scary, but it’s also sacred. Don’t mar it.) Anything can be rewritten—except nothing.

Be specific. You want to write something. Why? What exactly are you going for? Whether you’re at the beginning or the middle or the last damn sentence of something, you need to know exactly what you’re after. Verisimilitude? Laughter? Pain? Something that rhymes with orange? Whatever it is, be very cold about being able to break it down, so even if you walk away, you walk away with a goal.

Stop writing. Know when to walk away, when you’re grinding gears. This is tricky, because it’s easy to get lazy, but sometimes straining for inspiration when it’s not there is just going to tire you out and make the next session equally unproductive. I believe that Stephen King once likened it to kissing a corpse. But then, he would. Walk away, relax, and best of all…

Watch something. Watch, read, listen—it fills the creative tanks, reminds us why we wanted to write in the first place, and often, it’ll unlock the thing that’s missing. That doesn’t mean you’ll see something and subconsciously steal from it (though it doesn’t 100% NOT mean that), it just taps into the creative place a blocked writer can’t access. Very often I’ll see a movie that’ll completely inform what I’m writing, which will bear no resemblance of any kind to that movie. I’ll just know how I want to feel when I’m writing it. (Episode 10 of season three of Buffy: totes indebted to The Last Temptation of Christ.)

Have a deadline. I would probably never get anything written if it weren’t shooting next week. I’m a terrible procrastinator, which means the adrenaline of last-minute panic is my friend. (It’s all that kept me afloat in school, I’m sad to say. My attention has a disorderly deficit. There was no acronym for that when I was little.) But you can create deadlines of your own. Friends are good for this. Make yourself mutually accountable—you have to deliver such-and-many words by this-or-then time, as do they. You might not always (or ever) hold to these, but they can help you remember that your writing may matter to someone besides yourself.

Have rewards. I’m talking about cookies. Actually, I’m finishing with cookies. What matters more? Earn them, then enjoy them.

OK then. Good luck!

No, wait. Good writing! No—happy writing.

Ack. No! Um…and thus I have argued that the main causes of…blech.

This is Joss, signing…what? No.

Bon appetite! Rosebud! Nobody’s perfect! To infinity, and…I give up. I’m never gonna find the right ending.

I’m gettin’ a cookie.

excerpted from http://www.rookiemag.com/2012/11/get-unstuck/

Quick take: Conflict = Test

Written By: Jessica Morrell - Apr• 18•14

despairWhile conflict is the basis for fiction, a plot builds by adding on complications, surprises, and developments that add more tension and forward motion. Plots are not drawn as a straight line; instead there are zigzags, dead ends, sidetracks and crooked paths. Each of these elements adds more obstacles, more decisions to be made, paths to be chosen. At each turn, chaos, disorder, arguments, struggles, bewilderment, dilemmas should result.

To keep a story simmering, remember this: All types of conflict in a story must be some sort of test. Force a character to make tough choices that he or she would rather ignore. Make the choices and problems linked to his or her emotional core. Give the character dilemmas that clash with his beliefs and values.

 

From Idea to Story workshop on May 3

Written By: Jessica Morrell - Apr• 16•14

In case you missed it, I have a fabulous, practical, get-it-done workshop coming up. We’re going to brainstorm, problem solve a lot. Hate to use buzz words, but the truth is, authors who attended this workshop have gone on to publish their books.

And it’s in Manzanita, Oregon. If you’ve never spent time in lovely Manzanita, you owe yourself a trip. It’s about 2 hours  from Portland, 15 miles south of Cannon Beach on 101. Charming village with air you want to bottle. I always feel calm and creative there. In fact, have edited and written large chunks of 5 of my books there…in a cabin overlooking the endlessly-changing Pacific. I purposely schedule workshops and retreats in inspiring locales….but you probably already guessed that.

Here’s a photo of Manzanita at sunset. I have seen some of the loveliest sunsets of my lifetime in Manzanita…just thinking about them makes me feel blissful and goosebumpy. Not kidding.

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Here are details about the workshop. Please contact me soon…..

From Idea to Story

May 3, 9-4:30

The Center for Contemplative Arts, Manzanita, Oregon

Writers have long grappled with the problem of taking a flash of inspiration through the marathon process of completing a finished work. That flash is your premise. But a premise on its own is flimsy, must be build it up and needs the perfect story people to bring it to life until it becomes a compelling, awe-inspiring tale of… whatever it is you long to tell.

This workshop, for writers of all levels, will address key issues that must be confronted if you are going to assemble a myriad of pieces into a seamless whole. These issues include finding a shape for your story; how to treat plot and character as interdependent; how to avoid typical pitfalls when working. We’ll discuss forces and fears at play such as the fear or inability to finish, which is all too common. We’ll cover the basics of plotting, or if you’re writing a memoir, choosing the right elements and order for it. Participants can bring a brief outline of their plot and first three paragraphs.

We’ll also cover:

  • Determining if your premise is a true compass that will keep the story on track.
  • The basic underpinnings of stories—the anatomy of scenes and the anchor scenes that hold it together.
  • How believable, important stakes power the story.
  • Strategies for handling pacing anxiety and the urge to pad instead of plot.
  • Perfectionism, mistakes, and daring to make them.
  • Making tough choices about what to leave in and what to leave out.
  • How stories and endings are based on the protagonist’s deepest needs and fears.
  • How stories contain meaningful themes and are metaphors for life.

 To register: The cost is $80. Payment is required to register. Mail a check to Jessica Morrell, P.O. Box 820141, Portland, OR 97282-1141. PayPal also accepted. 

Now Write!

Written By: Jessica Morrell - Apr• 14•14

NowWriteSFF+HorrorFront-683x1024I’m in fabulous company in a new anthology: Now Write! Science Fiction, Fantasy, and Horror.

The fifth volume in the acclaimed Now Write! series of writing guides offers a full toolkit for beginning and experienced speculative genre writers seeking to generate unusual ideas, craft an engaging alternate reality, flesh out enthralling villains, aliens and monsters, or develop a blood-curdling twist ending.  Now Write! Science Fiction, Fantasy and Horror features lively and practical insight and exercises, straight from the top speculative genre writers working today, including:

Harlan Ellison® on crafting the perfect story title

Jack Ketchum on how economy of language helps create a truly frightening tale

Piers Anthony on making fantastical characters feel genuine and relatable

Ramsey Campbell on pushing your writing style in new directions

Aimee Bender on combining unexpected imagery to stir up your imagination

This collection of storytelling secrets from top genre writers—among them winners of Nebula, Hugo, Edgar, and Bram Stoker awards—is essential for any writer looking to take a leap beyond the ordinary.

My article is The Villains Handbook. You can find out more about the book and series here.

telling stories….

Written By: Jessica Morrell - Apr• 09•14

We tell stories for so many reasons; to entertain, to be understood, to explain, to engage, to re-visit the past, to imagine the future. Every child ever born anywhere in the world at any time loves to hear a story. It may be that storytelling is the best thing we can do for our mental health. ~ Jeanette Winterson

April is National Poetry Month

Written By: Jessica Morrell - Apr• 08•14

We also recognize that imagination has to struggle with the dragon of time afresh each day. Poetry must be written, continued, risked, tried, revised, erased, and tried again as long as we breathe and love, doubt and believe.” ~ Adam Zagajewski