Word by Word

Practical insights for writers from Jessica P Morrell

Erle Stanley Gardner’s method

Written By: Jessica Morrell - Mar• 20•14

 Erle Stanely Gardner was a lawyer although he was admitted to the bar without attending law school, and a prolific novelist and short story writer. He’s most famous for his character Perry Mason, who along with Della Street, Paul Drake and Hamilton Burger became household names in the 1960s.

 “Murder is not perpetrated in a vacuum. It is a product of greed, avarice, hate, revenge, or perhaps fear. As a splashing stone sends ripples to the farthest edges of the pond, murder affects the lives of many people.” (from The Case of the Horrified Heirs, 1964)

 In one of Erle Stanley Gardner’s notebooks he jotted the following reminders:

“Work on every plot until you have

1. Unusual opening incident

2. Complete character conflicts

3. Some emotional appeal

4. Some unusual slant of characters and situation

5. All stock situations eliminated

Make a genuine reader suspense in which he doesn’t know what will happen next and surprised either by

(a) What does happen

(b) the way in which it happens.”

Keep writing, keep dreaming, have heart

Quote from Amy Bloom

Written By: Jessica Morrell - Mar• 17•14

 

I think the point of every sentence, every detail, factual or imagined, and every line of dialogue is to illuminate character and advance the story. Research has been, for me, a reassuring and intriguing line of luminarias. ~ Amy Bloom

 

Welcome Readers

Written By: Jessica Morrell - Mar• 17•14

from my former blog The Writing Life Too. If you’d like to look through the archives you’ll find it here.

 

Quick Take: Introduce your Antagonist with Flair

Written By: Jessica Morrell - Mar• 12•14

           When first introducing your antagonist in the story beware of bringing him or her onto the stage as passive or low key. Now, it’s true that some antagonists are out to fool the protagonist from the get-go, but his or her true nature needs to be hinted at.  Or the antagonist’s agenda can be used–and let’s remember that whenever possible give all your characters warring agendas.

For example in Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park made into the blockbuster film we first meet John Hammond, the mastermind and creator of the park when he comes to visit and bribe the anthropologists. He needs them to sign off on his park so he can be covered by insurance. He bribes them with a promise of grant money to continue their work. It’s a great way of introducing his desperation and audacity. It’s also a deal with the devil.  After all, not many men dream of bringing dinosaurs back to life. Make sure your antagonist is active,  in motion throughout the story–sparring, eluding, taunting, scheming.

Create

Written By: Jessica Morrell - Mar• 11•14

Quick Take: Carry a writer’s notebook

Written By: Jessica Morrell - Mar• 10•14

 

Carry a writer’s notebook. Always. A writer’s notebook trains you to be a relentless observer. Using the notebook forces you to capture the endless ideas, phrases and stories that pop into our heads but are lost unless we jot them down immediately. So many of our ideas are lost unless we note them as soon as they occur.  So pause and record those sudden insights and flashes.

Then look around; pay attention to weather, recording the first breath of spring or the muffled magic of a snowfall.  Write about people, a co-worker who drives you crazy, your high school sweet heart, your in-laws and childhood bullies. Write about your memories, beliefs, and questions, but remember this is not a diary. It’s a canvass, a safe, deep place to throw words together with Jackson Pollack abandon.

Practice characters sketches, scenes, outlines and poems. Write about grief, loss, jealousy and other strong emotions. Write about bugs, trees, gardens, vistas, creatures, and flowers. Collect scents that you can later infuse into a story.  Write about how you imagine life in the West of 1800s or England in the Middle Ages. Write about places, worlds far from your own, populated by cowboys, sheiks, philanthropists, gypsies, Arctic explorers, royalty, conquerors, and orphans. Jot your observations of people you spot at the county fair, supermarket, or shopping mall. Write about the weather, the lighting at dusk, the night sky awash in silver light, a dinner party that lingered on with laughter and secrets and warmth. Write a scene or a description of an old couple holding hands. Write a conversation, a letter, a diary entry told in a character’s voice. Never go into the world alone; arm yourself as a writer.

Written By: Jessica Morrell - Mar• 01•14

“Today you will say things you can predict and other things you could never imagine this minute. Don’t reject them, let them come through when they’re ready, don’t think you can plan it all out. This day will never, no matter how long you live, happen again. It is exquisitely singular. It will never again be exactly repeated.”
~ Naomi Shihab Nye

I’ll be speaking March 8 at the Rose City RWA mini-conference

Written By: Jessica Morrell - Feb• 27•14

I’ll be giving a workshop on one of my favorite topics Anti-heroes: Color Them Grey at the Rose City’s RWA mini conference Craft Your Story and a Career.I will be covering why anti-heroes have become so popular in fiction, film, and television series; the anti-hero’s essential nature and role in fiction; why ladies love outlaws; and discuss some of the newcomers in this character category such as Marty and Cohle of HBO’s True Detectives.

You find the information on the event here.   What a lineup! And RWA isn’t just for romance writers. This writing organization presents the best information on craft and the business of writing in this industry.

Everything you’ve always wanted to know about crafting your story and career comes together in one place on March 8th, 2014. Join us for a fun filled gathering where you’ll learn from experts how to maintain pace, avoid clichés, build worlds, and take your writing to the next level.

You’ll also learn what it takes to navigate Google+ and create personal branding, and what editors expect and can do for you. And that’s not all! You’ll also learn about book cover design, skills for reading events, book sales, author signings, and the Oregon Regency Society.

Did I mention the cost is only $30 for members and $50 for nonmembers?And these folks are seriously fun?

See you there!

 

Pearl Buck from Gifts of Speech

Written By: Jessica Morrell - Feb• 26•14

          A good novelist, or so I have been taught in China, should be above all else tse ran, that is, natural, unaffected, and so flexible and variable as to be wholly at the command of the material that flows through him. His whole duty is only to sort life as it flows through him, and in the vast fragmentariness of time and space and event to discover essential and inherent order and rhythm and shape. We should never be able, merely by reading pages, to know who wrote them, for when the style of a novelist becomes fixed, that style becomes his prison. The Chinese novelists varied their writing to accompany like music their chosen themes. ..
The instinct which creates the arts is not the same as that which produces art. The creative instinct is, in its final analysis and in its simplest terms, an enormous extra vitality, a super-energy, born inexplicably in an individual, a vitality great beyond all the needs of his own living – an energy which no single life can consume. This energy consumes itself then in creating more life, in the form of music, painting, writing, or whatever is its most natural medium of expression. Nor can the individual keep himself from this process, because only by its full function is he relieved of the burden of this extra and peculiar energy – an energy at once physical and mental, so that all his senses are more alert and more profound than another man’s, and all his brain more sensitive and quickened to that which his senses reveal to him in such abundance that actuality overfiows into imagination. It is a process proceeding from within. It is the heightened activity of every cell of his being, which sweeps not only himself, but all human life about him, or in him, in his dreams, into the circle of its activity.

From the product of this activity, art is deducted – but not by him. The process which creates is not the process which deduces the shapes of art. The defining of art, therefore, is a secondary and not a primary process. And when one born for the primary process of creation, as the novelist is, concerns himself with the secondary process, his activity becomes meaningless. When he begins to make shapes and styles and techniques and new schools, then he is like a ship stranded upon a reef whose propeller, whirl wildly as it will, cannot drive the ship onward. Not until the ship is in its element agam can lt regain its course.

And for the novelist the only element is human life as he finds it in himself or outside himsel# The sole test of his work is whether or not his energy is producing more of that life. Are his creatures alive? That is the only question. And who can tell him? Who but those living human beings, the people? Those people are not absorbed in what art is or how it is made-are not, indeed, absorbed in anything very lofty, however good it is. No, they are absorbed only in themselves, in their own hungers and despairs and joys and above all, perhaps, in their own dreams. These are the ones who can really judge the work of the novelist, for they judge by that single test of reality. And the standard of the test is not to be made by the device of art, but by the simple comparison of the reality of what they read, to their own reality.

I have been taught, therefore, that though the novelist may see art as cool and perfect shapes, he may only admire them as he admires marble statues standing aloof in a quiet and remote gallery; for his place is not with them. His place is in the street. He is happiest there. The street is noisy and the men and women are not perfect in the technique of their expression as the statues are. They are ugly and imperfect, incomplete even as human beings, and where they come from and where they go cannot be known. But they are people and therefore infinitely to be preferred to those who stand upon the pedestals of art.

And like the Chinese novelist, I have been taught to want to write for these people. If they are reading their magazines by the million, then I want my stories there rather than in magazines read only by a few. For story belongs to the people. They are sounder judges of it than anyone else, for their senses are unspoiled and their emotions are free. No, a novelist must not think of pure literature as his goal. He must not even know this field too well, because people, who are his material, are not there. He is a storyteller in a village tent, and by his stories he entices people into his tent. He need not raise his voice when a scholar passes. But he must beat all his drums when a band of poor pilgrims pass on their way up the mountain in search of gods. To them he must cry, «I, too, tell of gods!» And to farmers he must talk of their land, and to old men he must speak of peace, and to old women he must tell of their children, and to young men and women he must speak of each other. He must be satisfied if the common people hear him gladly. At least, so I have been taught in China.

You can find the complete  Nobel address about the Chinese novel here .

December 12, 1938 at at Stockholm Concert Hall, Stockholm, Sweden

Quick Take:

Written By: Jessica Morrell - Feb• 21•14

I wrote a book that was published in 2008 by Writer’s Digest Books called Bullies, Bastards & Bitches, How to Write the Bad Guys in Fiction. In it I’m urging writers to take risks when they write characters; to know their character’s moral stance; and to consider who is the best woman or man for the job in your stories.  I talked about the growing popularity of anti-heroes in fiction and discussed the difference between anti-heroes and heroes.

A quick tip:

Both heroes and anti-heroes come into the story with some kind of wound, some troubling or difficult circumstances in their past. These always result in an emotional need that must be fulfilled. Without these wounds, emotional needs, troubles, they cannot fulfill their role and arc.