February
Thought for the day by David Bohm
“Between where you are now and where you’d like to be there’s a sort of barrier, or a chasm, and sometimes it’s a good idea to imagine that you’re already at the other side of that chasm, so that you can start on the unknown side.”
~ David Bohm
Quick Take: Search out the perfect objects to enhance storytelling
Consider weaving meaningful objects or possessions throughout your story. Then make certain these objects are repeated or reappear. In Markus Zusak’s The Book Thief there are books, the alphabet etched on the cellar walls, and the beautiful accordion. The books and alphabet represent a whole world that opens up to Liesel when she learns to read, her hunger for knowledge, her connection to her adopted father Hans and the Buergermeister’s wife who daringly loans her books. The title reflects this–young Liesel was so desperate to learn to read that she grabbed a book that someone had dropped–a gravedigger’s handbook. In one scene after a book burning ordered by the Nazis, Liesel snatches a burning book from the pile and carries it home. The accordion is a sign of friendship and connection.
Objects can also serve to push events along in a story. The family’s situation turns downright dangerous with the arrival of Max Vandenburg, the fugitive son of a Jewish comrade who saved Hans’ life during WWI. Hans now owns the accordion.
On the other hand, as the story goes along, the symbols of the Nazi regime also infiltrate, permeate the story. The flag with its swastika–an ancient symbol that once meant well-being–the armbands worn to signify Jewish identity, the troops and their powerful machinery of war.
In Stephen Spielberg’s film E.T. it’s the marigold plant.
In Lord of the Rings it’s the conch shell.
In Alice Hoffman’s latest novel The Marriage of Opposites the sea turtles come to shore every spring to lay their eggs and return to the sea. This also shows time passing and underlines the sense of magical realism and nature that permeate the story.
These items, or motifs, serve to connect the story, enhance themes, add subtext, and create emotional resonance. The objects can be static or can change such as the marigold thriving and wilting, and can also serve as sensory anchors in the story.
Keep writing, keep dreaming, have heart
Brian Doyle on Voice & Truth
“I was learning a lot of times what people said was not at all what they meant….It was hard to learn all the languages spoken in our house. There was the loose limber American language that we all spoke, and then there was the riverine sinuous Irish language that the old people spoke when they were angry, and there was the chittery sparrowish female language that my mother and grandmother and aunts and neighborhood women spoke, and then there was the raffish chaffing language that other dads spoke to my dad when the came over for cocktail parties, and then there was the high slow language we all spoke when priests were in the house, and there were the dialects spoken by only one person–for example, my sister, who spoke the haughty languorous language of her many cats, or my youngest brother, Tommy who spoke Tommy, which only he and my sister could understand. She would often translate for him, apparently he talked mostly about cheese and crayons.”
Brian Doyle, My Devils, The Sun Magzine
it all matters
“It all matters. That someone turns out the lamp, picks up the windblown wrapper, says hello to the invalid, pays at the unattended lot, listens to the repeated tale, folds the abandoned laundry, plays the game fairly, tells the story honestly, acknowledges help, gives credit, says good night, resists temptation, wipes the counter, waits at the yellow, makes the bed, tips the maid, remembers the illness, congratulates the victor, accepts the consequences, takes a stand, steps up, offers a hand, goes first, goes last, chooses the small portion, teaches the child, tends to the dying, comforts the grieving, removes the splinter, wipes the tear, directs the lost, touches the lonely, is the whole thing.
What is most beautiful is least acknowledged.
What is worth dying for is barely noticed.”
– Laura McBride
“One day I will find the right words, and they will be simple.” ~ Jack Kerouac
Quick Take: Make your Crucible Hell-Hot
In fiction the cauldron or crucible is a setting or situation that forces characters to change or make difficult decisions; to face what they’d rather not face.
I’ve written about cauldrons before and mentioned how they must be inescapable. Two powerful examples come to mind–the islands in Lord of the Rings and Jurassic Park. Let’s return to this concept for a minute. I lived in Milwaukee, Wisconsin in the 1970s and 80s. During these decades the heavy machinery factories were starting to close down and the blue collar jobs started disappearing. For a few years I lived on the south side of town and nearby was a huge foundry. I can still remember summer evenings driving or pedaling past when the workers would be outside on break. The furnaces were deep orange and scarlet against the darkening skies, sparks flying, shooting high, the mens’ black, sweat-streaked faces, slumped shoulders, the whole thing like something out of Inferno. The place radiated with not only heat, but also danger, toil, and misery. 
Do you know how real-life crucibles work? It’s a technique started centuries ago. It’s the furnace or container for molten metal where the iron ore, for example, is placed under extreme heat to liquefy. This removes the impurities and once the impurities are melted away or separated, the steel is stronger. Crucibles are used for other metals such as aluminum, brass, bronze, and copper.
Your crucible is a potent literary device that strengthens and focuses the drama. Along with the antagonist, it will force the protagonist to act in ways he or she normally wouldn’t act. Often his or her worst fears come into play.
The crucible can be anything or place that creates unbearable pressures–a dysfunctional family, a hostage situation, a workplace, or the Titanic. Even if the crucible seems benign to outsiders, it must be a huge threat for the protagonist.
Keep writing, keep dreaming, have heart
More writing contests & resources
The Writer has posted more writing contests and resources here including their upcoming contest judged by Colum McCann that awards a first prize of $1,000. But enter soon since the deadline is midnight December 6.
The fine print:
- Entry fees: one story for $25, and up to five additional stories for $15 each on the same transaction.
- Must be 18 years or older to enter.
- Visit our contest page for more details.













