I preach the gospel of pay attention. In fact I preach it a lot. Because while some stories are meant to be written, must be written, it’s the smaller details that bring scenes, moments, characters to life. And for that a writer needs to be plugged in to her surroundings, an observer, a collector, a detective.
Here are some things to notice in your daily gatherings that will in turn feed your imaginings:
- First impressions when you meet a new person, especially body language and mannerisms.
- The varying tones in a person’s voice and laughter.
- Fleeting facial expressions.
- The way music makes you feel.
- How a person walks into a room or new environment.
- How people hold their hands, use their hands when they talk.
- The colors and hues of sunrise, sunsets, clouds, sky before and after storms.
- What is unsaid in a conversation, but still pulses beneath it.
- Moon phases and what exactly waxing gibbous means and how the phases affect nighttime visibility.
- Starlight and constellations. Two words writers: look up.
- Smells/scents of each season and each building you enter, neighborhood you visit.
- Background sounds–the music playing at your favorite stores, the hubbub at Costco, the other diners and kitchen sounds in a restaurant, traffic sounds including sirens wailing, freeway noise coming from far away. How do the sounds make you feel?
- Cozy, ‘lullaby’ sounds–what sounds make you feel safe, comforted, easy?
- Old photos–collect them at garage sales, antique stores, flea markets.
- Plants growing in sidewalk cracks, under logs, in shaded or overlooked places, abandoned fields or yards, empty lots.
- How a person’s eye color changes in varying lighting.
- How emotions are reflected in a person’s eyes.
- How people react to surprises, shocking news, crises.
- Body parts–arthritic knuckles and knees, the graceful lines of a young girl’s neck, the shell colors of eyelids, a baby’s joints, feet, hands.
- The way people look when they’re diminished by grief, pain, illness. How do they hold their bodies? Where does grief reveal itself in the body?
- The belongings/keepsakes a person holds most dear.
- Weathered buildings, abandoned buildings, old wood and bricks, crumbling walls.
- Portals and entries that lead to gardens, alleys, neighborhoods.
- Sounds carried on the wind.
- Sounds of weather, wind, and bodies of water.
- Chalk art, children’s art, an artist’s brush strokes.
Keep writing, keep dreaming, keep collecting
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