October
Couldn’t agree more because verbs are the ENGINES of your sentences
“Most people use twenty verbs to describe everything from a run in their stocking to the explosion of an atomic bomb. You know the ones: was, did, had, made, went, looked….One size fits all looks like crap on anyone. Sew yourself a custom made suit. Pick a better verb. Challenge all those verbs to really lift some weight for you. ” ~ Janet Fitch
Might I add: saw, see, put, hear, a nd sit? And I haven’t thought about runs in my nylons in a long time… I used clear nail polish to stop it so I wouldn’t need to throw them away.
Be kind out there.
Quick Take: Stand Your Ground
Actually I’m talking about the people or story people in your stories. Readers need to know exactly where these folks are located. At all times. Is he or she standing on a dock watching a purple-hued sunset, or on a beach gazing in wonder at a forever sky, or a character waiting impatiently in a crowded grocery store line with bad music playing too loud while a baby’s wails grows louder and more shrill?
Where is your character located in relation to others? What does the distance between them suggest? Are you suggesting intimacy or hostility by the pair’s posture and body language?
And what else does his or her body communicate? Does she feel safe in this place? At peace? Or eyes darting around, searching out dangers? Arms akimbo or wrapped across her chest?
And speaking of grounding readers in your story, pull in other aspects of the scene. Use details to paint the emotional tone, whether it’s tension or gloom or terror or joy.
Keep writing, keep dreaming, invite magic, stay inspired
On the Equinox…
Wishing you balance and a new beginnings as autumn launches in the northern hemisphere.
And writers who are taking part in NaNoWriMo are you gathering your thoughts and ideas, putting together an outline or your own method of pre-planning? Perhaps using a notebook, collecting photos of your characters?
Keep writing, keep dreaming, have heart
any screen shots out there?
Hi there,
My posts and drafts were lost via a GoDaddy migration problem.
The missing posts happened after July 1,2021. I would especially appreciate a longer column Voice is Identity.
I’ve lost hours of work. If anyone has links or copies of any posts could you please contact me via email at jessicapagemorrell at gmail dot com?
Thanks–more to come once I dry my tears. {Joke. Sort of}
Jessica
Keep writing, keep dreaming, have heart
where does fiction come from?
I think fiction comes from everything you’ve done, and said, and dreamed, and imagined. It comes from everything you’ve read and haven’t read… I think my work comes out of the culture of the world around me. I think that’s where my language comes from.~ Don Delillo
Congratulations to Pulitzer winners
Where would we be without dogged journalists and writers who uncover difficult truths, facts, and problems that need solving? Who help protect our fragile democracy. Who work towards accountability and justice. My profound congratulations to all the Pulitzer Prize winners, including Darnella Frazier for her Special Citation for courageously filming George Floyd’s murder. Her courage and level-headedness still astounds me. Her testimony at Floyd’s murder trial was elucidating and heartbreaking.
Here’s a link that lists the winners
And here’s a link to an article about what journalism students can learn from this year’s winners. Please support journalism in its many forms.
But you don’t need to be a journalist to make a better world. There are so many ways writers can reveal the truths of our times, truths of the human footprint on this planet. Songs that mend our hearts, stir our emotions, songs that we listen to over and over because their meaning cannot be denied. Because reading, writing, listening, especially songs and poetry, feels like soul to soul communication.
Poetry teaches us the power of language and provides solace. Phyllis Knight said it best: “Turning to poetry gives rhythm to silence, light to darkness. In poetry we find the magic of metaphor, compactness of expression, use of the five senses, and simplicity or complexity in a few lines.”
Reading feeds us. Essays enlarge our understanding, introduce us to other worldviews, help us examine our culture and society. Force us to examine our own opinions and beliefs.
Fiction transports but also teaches us empathy and stretches our imagination. Stories decode, shed light on human nature and all our many trials. Teach us how to avoid other people’s mistakes. Help create a life worth living.
All writing forces us to think deeper, understand ourselves more, take stock of our ideas and skills.
Keep writing, keep making a better world, keep dreaming, have heart